I like the direction of the lighter value screened letters in the background. Maybe just lighten up the middle value gray before the foreground. The balancing act on the T could also work but the grouping in the lower left seems to be moving in a different direction.
I like the direction of the lighter value screened letters in the background. Maybe just lighten up the middle value gray before the foreground. The balancing act on the T could also work but the grouping in the lower left seems to be moving in a different direction.