Another cocktail inspired solution! Maybe try it without the stroke only treatment of the interior letters. And play around with alternate compositional placement.
I was surprised to see the “o” and the “j” represented in the liquid of the glass, because I had assumed they were the olive garnish. You could maybe jumble the order of the letters in the liquid and make them a bit bigger to eliminate these letters.
Another cocktail inspired solution! Maybe try it without the stroke only treatment of the interior letters. And play around with alternate compositional placement.
I was surprised to see the “o” and the “j” represented in the liquid of the glass, because I had assumed they were the olive garnish. You could maybe jumble the order of the letters in the liquid and make them a bit bigger to eliminate these letters.