3 thoughts on “Allison L. Alphabet Soup Trial

  1. Looks good. Nice construction in the upper portion. It has a nice sense of scale and weightlessness.
    The horizon/ground plane is a strong concept too. You could experiment with a smaller scaled text fill and maybe try it without the gradient but overall you did a nice job with the concept and composition.

  2. I like it on the lighter ground. Perhaps just lighten the value on the lower letters and I don’t think you need the reflective element.

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